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i live in Jeollabuk-do but my high is in Suwon-si and i maybe next month i will live in seoul.
so today i went Seoul for my dormitory.
dormitory is provided by church for university students living in country and pastor's kids.
today was interview for that.
after interview i met friends 1년 반만에.
we had a bulgogi and went Naksan Park.
i really want to see night view, but after 5pm, the sun do not go down so i give up and back. 5시가 지나도 어두워지지 않아서 그냥 내려왔다.
Jan 28th 2012 01:38 Anny

  • i live in Jeollabuk-do but my high is in Suwon-si and i maybe next month i will live in seoul.
  • I live in Jeollabuk-do but my high school is in Suwon-si and i maybe next month I will live in Seoul.

 

  • so today i went Seoul for my dormitory.
  • , so today i went to Seoul for my dormitory.Tip: Don't start sentence with the word "so" or "but".

 

  • dormitory is provided by church for university students living in country and pastor's kids.
  • The dormitory is provided by the church for university students living in country and pastor's kids.

 

  • today was interview for that.
  • Today an interview was held for that. OR Today we had an interview for that.

 

  • after interview i met friends 1년 반만에.
  • after the interview I met friends 1년 반만에.hmm...the 한글 = one year and a half (?)

 

  • we had a bulgogi and went Naksan Park.
  • We had a bulgogi and went to Naksan Park.

 

  • i really want to see night view, but after 5pm, the sun do not go down so i give up and back.
  • i really wanted to see the night view, but after 5pm, the sun did not go down so i gave up and went back.Past tense. want --> wanted. To do ---> did. give ---> gave.

 
반갑습니다! 저 한국어 공부해. 하지만 한국어 잘 못 해요.ᄏᄏ
Hello, nice to meet you! When did you start learning english?
I wish I could write in 한글 as fluently, but I feel more confortable speaking Korean than writting it. Writting in 한글 is 어려워 for me, but I will keep practicing! You too! Keep practicing your english, it's very good :) 너의 영어는 좋아요 :)
Jan 28th 2012 02:20 TheBigFish

  • i live in Jeollabuk-do but my high is in Suwon-si and i maybe next month i will live in seoul.
  • I live in Jeollabuk-do, but my high is in Suwon. Maybe next month I will live in Seoul,

 

  • so today i went Seoul for my dormitory.
  • so today I went to Seoul to apply for my dormitory.

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  • dormitory is provided by church for university students living in country and pastor's kids.
  • The dormitory is provided by the church for to university students living in the country and who are pastor's kids.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • today was interview for that.
  • Today I had an interview for that.

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • after interview i met friends 1년 반만에.
  • After the interview, I met friends who are freshmen.*1년 반만 라는 말이 학년에 대해 말하고 싶습니까?

1 people think this correction is good.  

  • 5시가 지나도 어두워지지 않아서 그냥 내려왔다.
  • 5시가 지나도 어두워지지 않아서 그냥 내려왔다.Even though it was past 5pm, the sky was still light-out, so I gave up seeing the sunset and went back down.

 
잘 썼어요. 주의한 점은 고유 명사 쓸때마다 대글자 써야 하고 접속사 시작하지 마시며 "the" is definite article.그러므로 구제적인 명사 써야 한다. 이제 자네 누군지 알아요.^^
Jan 28th 2012 19:11 꿈이있는자유
After the interview, I met friends who are freshmen.*1년 반만 라는 말이 학년에 대해 말하고 싶습니까?
학년이 아니라, 1년반동안 못만났던 친구를 만난다는 뜻인데 어떻게 표현하면 될까요?
Jan 28th 2012 20:31 TheBigFish
After the interview, I met friends whom I have not seen for more than a year.
Jan 28th 2012 05:48 Sunny

I was born in Seoul, and I have some friends in Suwon~

Actually, I have a friend named Suwon... and she was born in Suwon... ㅋㅋㅋ ㅡ.ㅡ
Jan 28th 2012 19:12 꿈이있는자유
i also have a friend named Suwon and live in Suwon ㅋㅋㅋㅋ!
Jan 28th 2012 19:50 Sunny
Haha, what a coincidence.
Jan 28th 2012 08:59 cranetrain

  • i live in Jeollabuk-do but my high is in Suwon-si and i maybe next month i will live in seoul.
  • I live in Jeollabuk-do, but my high school is in Suwon-si, and next month I'll move to Seoul.

 
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